英語四級寫作計劃第一周第5天敘事類作文結構公式
一、敘事類作文結構公式
四級寫作中涉及的敘事類作文一般是要求考生敘述一個事件發生的經過，如車禍、生病或一次難忘的經歷，然后談談自己的感受或得到的啟示。
例(2003年9月)
Directions : For this part , you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Tth Day Classmate Fell ill . You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese :
1.簡單敘述一下這位貯存器學生病(或受傷)的情況。
2.同學、老師和你是如何幫助他/她的。
3.人與人之間的這種相互關愛你的感受是
1.常見結構公式陳列
第一段 交代事件背景
引出事件。
進一步描述背景情況或概述事件的特點。
由背景引出具體事件或說明事件的重要性。
第一段 交代事件背景
主題句：總述事件發生的背景。
擴展句一：進一步描述背景情況或概述事件的特點。
擴展句二：由背景引出具體事件或說明事件的重要性。
第二段 敘述事件經過
Now I still remember clearly 引出事件。/ There is one thing that is still vivid in my mind until now .
事件發生的時間和當時的情形。
接下來的情況。
進一步的發展。
As a result / However , 事件結果。
第二段 敘述事件經過
主題句：概括引出要講述的事件。
擴展句一：交代情件發生的時間和當時的情況。
擴展句二：描述接下來的情況。
擴展句三：描述事件的結果或影響。
結尾句：說明事件的結果或影響。
第三段 談談個人感受
Every time I recall 該事件， 我 的感受或得到的啟示。/該事件left me in deep thought / gave me a significant lesson .
第一點感受。
第二點感受。
第三段 談談個人感受
我 由這件事而引發的感受或得到的啟示。
擴展句一： 我 的第一點感受。
擴展句二： 我 的第二點感受。
2.結構公式真題演示
例(2005年6月)
Directions : For this part , you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay in honor of teachers on the occasion of Teachers Day . You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese :
1.向老師致以節日祝賀。
2.從一件難忘的事回憶老師的教誨和無私的奉獻。
3.我如何報答老師的關愛
參考范文
Honor for My Teacher
The once per years Teachers Day will come soon . On this special occasion , all of us students should express our respect and love to our teachers . And I especially want to take this opportunity to show my thanks to my dearest teacher , Mr.Li.
There in one thing that is still vivid in my mind until now . That was in 2001 , when the SARS was on . Unfortunately , I was in hospital for a severe cold . Though the doctor had proved I was just suffering from a normal cold , few students or teachers would like to come to see me . However , Mr.Li came to see me every day and cared about me until I recovered .
Every time I remind that experience , I feel deeply his unselfish love and devoting spirit . I must return him with my practical actions . I will , as he does , give others love and help when they are in tuouble . I believe that is what he expects me most .
一、敘事類作文結構公式
四級寫作中涉及的敘事類作文一般是要求考生敘述一個事件發生的經過，如車禍、生病或一次難忘的經歷，然后談談自己的感受或得到的啟示。
例(2003年9月)
Directions : For this part , you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Tth Day Classmate Fell ill . You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese :
1.簡單敘述一下這位貯存器學生病(或受傷)的情況。
2.同學、老師和你是如何幫助他/她的。
3.人與人之間的這種相互關愛你的感受是
1.常見結構公式陳列
第一段 交代事件背景
引出事件。
進一步描述背景情況或概述事件的特點。
由背景引出具體事件或說明事件的重要性。
第一段 交代事件背景
主題句：總述事件發生的背景。
擴展句一：進一步描述背景情況或概述事件的特點。
擴展句二：由背景引出具體事件或說明事件的重要性。
第二段 敘述事件經過
Now I still remember clearly 引出事件。/ There is one thing that is still vivid in my mind until now .
事件發生的時間和當時的情形。
接下來的情況。
進一步的發展。
As a result / However , 事件結果。
第二段 敘述事件經過
主題句：概括引出要講述的事件。
擴展句一：交代情件發生的時間和當時的情況。
擴展句二：描述接下來的情況。
擴展句三：描述事件的結果或影響。
結尾句：說明事件的結果或影響。
第三段 談談個人感受
Every time I recall 該事件， 我 的感受或得到的啟示。/該事件left me in deep thought / gave me a significant lesson .
第一點感受。
第二點感受。
第三段 談談個人感受
我 由這件事而引發的感受或得到的啟示。
擴展句一： 我 的第一點感受。
擴展句二： 我 的第二點感受。
2.結構公式真題演示
例(2005年6月)
Directions : For this part , you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay in honor of teachers on the occasion of Teachers Day . You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese :
1.向老師致以節日祝賀。
2.從一件難忘的事回憶老師的教誨和無私的奉獻。
3.我如何報答老師的關愛
參考范文
Honor for My Teacher
The once per years Teachers Day will come soon . On this special occasion , all of us students should express our respect and love to our teachers . And I especially want to take this opportunity to show my thanks to my dearest teacher , Mr.Li.
There in one thing that is still vivid in my mind until now . That was in 2001 , when the SARS was on . Unfortunately , I was in hospital for a severe cold . Though the doctor had proved I was just suffering from a normal cold , few students or teachers would like to come to see me . However , Mr.Li came to see me every day and cared about me until I recovered .
Every time I remind that experience , I feel deeply his unselfish love and devoting spirit . I must return him with my practical actions . I will , as he does , give others love and help when they are in tuouble . I believe that is what he expects me most .
