SAT作文評分標準解讀2:結構分

　　滿分標準中的第二個要求：is well organized and clearly focused, demonstrating clear coherence and smooth progression of ideas.

　　一篇完整的SAT作文結構應該是這樣的：

　　P1 Introductory sentence. Thesis. Sentence previewing three examples.

　　P2 Transition + topic sentence. Support sentence. Additional support (Example 1)。 Closing sentence summarizing the paragraph (with the take-away point)。

　　P3 Transition + topic sentence. Support sentence. Additional support(Example 2)。 Closing sentence summarizing the paragraph (with the take-away point)。

　　P4 Transition + topic sentence. Support sentence. Additional support (Example 3)。 Closing sentence summarizing the paragraph (with the take-away point)。

　　P5 Conclusion.

　　現在許多學生的寫作的一個很大的問題在于，開頭段結尾段的結構能夠得到保證，但是中間段落的Topic Sentence和 Concluding Sentence不喜歡寫。單純的在開頭段后舉例是不能有力的證明自己的觀點的。每個中間段的完整結構必須有分支觀點句，支撐句和結論句。分支觀點句往往是例子要告訴人們的道理或者作者要通過例子表達的內容的總括。結論句往往是對例子的分析：在這個例子中，通過什么從而使什么怎么樣。

　　通過上文提到的題目為例，以下是依據該題的一個完整中間段落：

　　If life is considered more important than honesty, lies can be justified.

　　A very representative example of this point is the story of Nicolaus Copernicus, the vanguard of modern astronomy. His idea that the earth rotates around the sun and human beings are just part of the nature was so radical at his time that the Roman Catholic Church accused him of serious crime of heresy. Knowing that he would die if he continued to tell his theory publicly, he told lies that he recanted his theory. And so he protected his life. His idea though he renounced in front of the church, he secretly continued his research. In this case, Nicolaus did not tell the truth. However, he followed his heart and he contributed tremendously to the scientific community. Circumstances justified his lies because life is much more valuable than anything else on earth.

　　黃色標注的部分為結構提示部分。第一個和最后一個句子是分支觀點句和結論句。Example所在的句子是例子的引出，in this case 舉例完后對例子的總結分析。這樣一個中間段落才稱得上是一個結構完整的中間段。這也是眾多考試寫作是應該注意的一個重要問題。

　　SAT作文評分標準解讀2:結構分

　　滿分標準中的第二個要求：is well organized and clearly focused, demonstrating clear coherence and smooth progression of ideas.

　　一篇完整的SAT作文結構應該是這樣的：

　　P1 Introductory sentence. Thesis. Sentence previewing three examples.

　　P2 Transition + topic sentence. Support sentence. Additional support (Example 1)。 Closing sentence summarizing the paragraph (with the take-away point)。

　　P3 Transition + topic sentence. Support sentence. Additional support(Example 2)。 Closing sentence summarizing the paragraph (with the take-away point)。

　　P4 Transition + topic sentence. Support sentence. Additional support (Example 3)。 Closing sentence summarizing the paragraph (with the take-away point)。

　　P5 Conclusion.

　　現在許多學生的寫作的一個很大的問題在于，開頭段結尾段的結構能夠得到保證，但是中間段落的Topic Sentence和 Concluding Sentence不喜歡寫。單純的在開頭段后舉例是不能有力的證明自己的觀點的。每個中間段的完整結構必須有分支觀點句，支撐句和結論句。分支觀點句往往是例子要告訴人們的道理或者作者要通過例子表達的內容的總括。結論句往往是對例子的分析：在這個例子中，通過什么從而使什么怎么樣。

　　通過上文提到的題目為例，以下是依據該題的一個完整中間段落：

　　If life is considered more important than honesty, lies can be justified.

　　A very representative example of this point is the story of Nicolaus Copernicus, the vanguard of modern astronomy. His idea that the earth rotates around the sun and human beings are just part of the nature was so radical at his time that the Roman Catholic Church accused him of serious crime of heresy. Knowing that he would die if he continued to tell his theory publicly, he told lies that he recanted his theory. And so he protected his life. His idea though he renounced in front of the church, he secretly continued his research. In this case, Nicolaus did not tell the truth. However, he followed his heart and he contributed tremendously to the scientific community. Circumstances justified his lies because life is much more valuable than anything else on earth.

　　黃色標注的部分為結構提示部分。第一個和最后一個句子是分支觀點句和結論句。Example所在的句子是例子的引出，in this case 舉例完后對例子的總結分析。這樣一個中間段落才稱得上是一個結構完整的中間段。這也是眾多考試寫作是應該注意的一個重要問題。