【試題回放】假定你是李華，正在英國接受英語培訓，住在一戶英國人家里。今天你的房東Mrs. Wilson 不在家，你準備外出，請給Mrs. Wilson 寫一留言條，內容包括：

　　1.外出購物

　　2.替房東還書

　　3.Tracy 來電話留言：1)咖啡屋見面取消

　　2)此事已告知Susan

　　3) 盡快回電

　　注意：1. 詞數100左右;

　　2.可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。

　　Mrs. Wilson,

　　Im going out shopping, and wont be back until about 5:00 pm. I have taken with me the two books you asked me to return to the City Library. At about 1 oclock this afternoon, Tracy called, saying that she couldnt meet you at Bolton Coffee tomorrow morning as she has something important to attend to. She felt very sorry about that, but said that you could set some other time for the meeting. She wanted you to call her back as soon as you are home. She has already told Susan about this change.

　　Yours,

　　Li Hua

　　[名師點評]

　　本文屬于提綱式要點作文，是學生比較熟悉的題材，體現了英語學習應該注意實用性，生活型的原則。行文人稱、時態運用恰當、準確，各個要點間邏輯連貫，行文通順。提綱類書面表達不是簡單的逐條翻譯，而是將所給的幾個要點合理的組成比較通順的語句，因此要仔細組織語言，合理安排結構。在語言方面，要特別注意簡潔明了，開頭要開門見山。

　　【試題回放】鼠標是計算機時代最佳的人機交互工具之一。它極大地方便了人們的計算機操作。但是，過分依賴鼠標的習慣也會帶來一些不利影響。請你以鼠標為切入點，根據下表所提示的信息，用英語寫一篇短文。

　　鼠標的必要性對多數人來說，操作計算機，上網沖浪

　　鼠標的便捷性點擊、移動、插入、拷貝、刪除編輯文本，搜索信息

　　收發郵件，選購商品

　　點播音樂，下載電影

　　如果過分依賴鼠標

　　注意：

　　1.對所給要點逐一陳述，適當發揮，不要簡單翻譯。

　　2.詞數150左右。開頭已經寫好，不計人總詞數。

　　3.作文中不得提及考生所在學校和本人姓名。

　　The mouse is a most effective device used by people to communicate with a computer.

　　For most people, its almost impossible to operate a computer without a mouse, let alone surf the Internet. A well-chosen mouse is really handy, flexible and convenient in controlling the screen. With the functions of inserting, deleting, moving and copying, it enables us to edit test, browse web page and download what we want. It can even bring us a flood of music, movies and PC games. Just imagine, all this can be done with a cute mouse.

　　A convenient tool can certainly make our work easier, but it doesnt always help in a positive way. Too much ready information on our fingertips leaves little room for knowledge pursuing. Too many ready answers make us less excited in finding truth. Relying too much on mouse clicking makes us lazier and less creative both mentally and physically.

　　【名師點評】本文為提綱式說明文體裁，所選內容與我們生活相關，考生只要把所給要點逐條陳述，適度發揮，不要逐條翻譯即可。文章說理清楚，語言流暢，句式表達多樣，用詞恰當、準確。不失為一篇滿分作文。

　　2008高考英語滿分作文

　　【全國卷】

　　【試題回放】假定你是李華，從小喜愛大熊貓,一直通過有關網站關注三年前在美國圣迭哥動物園出生的大熊貓蘇琳和她的母親白云。現在蘇琳即將三歲。請根據以下要點給動物園工作人員寫一封信：

　　1、 自我介紹;2、 祝賀蘇琳生日;3、 感謝工作人員;4、 索取蘇琳三歲生日照。

　　注意：1、詞數100左右;2、可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫;3、開頭語已為你寫好。

　　例文：

　　Dear Sir/Madam,

　　Greetings from China!

　　Im Li Hua, a student in Sichuan. Ive been a panda lover since I was a child. About three years ago I was delighted to learn that Baiyun gave birth to her daughter Sulin and Ive been watching her grow on your website,. Now shes going to be three. Id like to wish her a happy birthday and to express my thanks to you for your hard work, because of which Sulin and her parents are living a happy and healthy life in the US.

　　By the way, could I have a photo of Sulin taken on her third birthday? Thank you very much in advance.

　　Yours truly,

　　Li Hua

　　【名師點評】本文寫作的內容要點如下：

　　1.自我介紹;2.信息來源;3.祝賀生日;4.感謝照顧;5.索取照片;6.合適的結尾。

　　這封信格式正確，行文規范，描述有條不紊，稱呼、正文中的開頭及結尾、結束語均表達到位。文章行文活潑，感情真摯，語言表述準確，洋溢著作者因大熊貓得到精心照顧而對美方人員的感激之情，以及希望自己愿望成真，得到照片的希冀之情。長短句運用合理，結合了簡單句和復合句，流暢自然，不露痕跡，的確是一篇佳作。

　　積累卡片英漢互譯

　　好詞1.delighted adj.欣喜的，快樂的 2.express v.表達 3.give birth to v.產生，生育

　　好句Id like to wish her a happy birthday and to express my thanks to you for your hard work, because of which Sulin and her parents are living a happy and healthy life in the US.

　　我祝福它生日快樂并且對你們的辛勤工作表達我的感激之情，正是你們的努力工作讓蘇琳和它的父母在美國過著幸福和健康的生活。

　　評析：定語從句的使用。

　　【北京卷】

　　【試題回放】假設你是紅星中學高三一班的學生李華，為校刊英語園地寫一篇題為Our Spring Outing 的英文稿件。 請根據以下四幅圖的先后順序，敘述上周你們班從準備春游到春游結束的完整過程。

　　注意： 詞數不少于60.

　　提示詞： 游樂園 amusement park 垃圾箱 bin

　　Last Thursday, we had a class meeting to discuss where to go for our spring outing. We came up with several choices such as going boating, climbing a mountain, and going to an amusement park. Finally, we decided to go mountain climbing.

　　The next day, we set off early in the morning. While climbing the mountain, we enjoyed the warm sunshine and a beautiful view . However, when we reached the top, we were shocked to see litter here and there, such as bottles and banana peels. Then we started to pick up the litter and put the rubbish into the nearby recycling bin and non-recycling bin respectively.

　　We were tired but happy.

　　【名師點評】

　　本情景作文的內容要點如下：1.討論;2.爬山;3.檢拾別人的垃圾;4.投放垃圾。內容要點可用不同方式表達。本文覆蓋了所有內容要點，較好地完成了試題規定的任務。其中，寫作主題突出，詳略得當，應用了較多的語法結構和詞匯，而且有效的使用了語句間的連接成分，使全文機構緊湊。本文敘述清楚，描寫細致，準確運用了很多富有表現力的詞和句型，例如：set off early，enjoyed the warm sunshine and a beautiful view, were shocked to see litter here and there 等，將活動的情形很形象地描述了出來。

　　積累卡片英漢互譯

　　好詞1 set off 出發 2. litter n.廢棄物 3.respectively adv.分別地

　　好句1.While climbing the mountain, we enjoyed the warm sunshine and a beautiful view .

　　在爬山時，我們享受著溫暖的陽光和美麗的風景。

　　1. However, when we reached the top, we were shocked to see litter here and there, such as bottles and banana peels.

　　然而，當我們登上山頂，被眼前的一幕驚呆了：瓶子和香蕉皮這樣的廢棄物到處都是。

　　評析：細節描寫，生動形象。shock一詞也用得生動傳神。

　　【江蘇卷】

　　【試題回放】實現有效的溝通，建立良好的人際關系，不僅要善于言表，更要學會傾聽。請你根據下表中所提供的信息，寫一篇題為 Being a Good Listener 的英文演講稿。

　　為何傾聽表示尊重，增進理解，建立良好的人際關系

　　誰來傾聽家長傾聽孩子理解孩子，消除代溝，

　　老師傾聽學生了解學生，滿足需求，

　　同學相互傾聽增進友誼，互幫互學，

　　怎樣傾聽

　　注意：

　　1、 對所給要點，逐一陳述，適當發揮，不要簡單翻譯。

　　2、 詞數150左右。開頭和結尾已經寫好，不計入總詞數。

　　3、 演講稿中不得提及考生所在學校及本人姓名。

　　Good afternoon, everyone.

　　The topic of my speech today is Being a Good Listener.

　　Good listening can always show respect, promote understanding, and improve interpersonal relationship.

　　Many people suggest that parents should listen more to their children, so they will understand them better, and find it easy to narrow the generation gap; teachers should listen more to their students, then they can meet their needs better, and place themselves in a good relationship with their students; students should listen more to their classmates, thus they will help and learn from each other, and a friendship is likely to be formed.

　　What I want to stress is that each of us should listen to others. Show your respect and never stop others till they finish their talk; show you are interested by a supportive silence or a knowing smile; be open-minded to different opinions even though you dont like them. In a word, good listening can really enable us to get closer to each other.

　　Thank you for your listening!

　　【名師點評】

　　這是一篇感情真摯、熱情洋溢的演講稿，文中大量運用排比句型，不但準確流暢地表達出題目中所提供的信息，而且體現出作者熟練運用英語的能力以及不俗的文采。第三段中所使用的相同結構的復合句式，將傾聽的對象及其作用闡述得淋漓盡致;而第四段中用一系列的祈使句議論應如何傾聽，則更進一步地增強了這篇演說稿的說服力。

　　積累卡片英漢互譯

　　好詞1.promote v .促進 2. interpersonal adj.人際的3. generation gap. 代溝

　　4. open-minded adj. 虛心的

　　好句1. students should listen more to their classmates, thus they will help and learn from each other, and a friendship is likely to be formed.

　　同學之間應該互相傾聽，這樣他們可以互相學習和幫助，也會形成友誼。

　　評析：復雜句的組合，被動句的使用。

　　2. What I want to stress is that each of us should listen to others.

　　我想強調的是我們每個人都應該更多的傾聽他人。

　　評析：復合句的使用。

　　【湖北卷】

　　【試題回放】假設你是卜曼宜，你購買了一部某外國公司生產的手機，因有質量問題，要求該公司更換。請根據下列要點，用英文寫一封電子郵件。

　　要點：1. 問題：手機不響鈴，不能發短信;該產品已售完，無法更換;型號新，無配件，無法維修。 2. 要求：公司應盡快予以更換。

　　注意：1. 詞數為100左右;

　　2. 參考詞匯：配件 spare part;

　　3. 電子郵件的開頭和結尾已為你寫好;

　　4.已給出的電子郵件的開頭和結尾不得抄入答題卡。

　　Dear Sir，

　　I am writing to you for the mobile phone of Dephone-S250 I bought on 20th Apr.2008 at Tele Mall in Wuhan, P.R. China. Ten days after that, it didnt ring and send short messages. Then I took it to the seller, but was told that the model had been sold out and I had to wait at least three months for a new one. I had no choice but to go to the repairman. To my disappointment ,he said since it was a new model in China, it was impossible to fix it without the right spare parts. I was so desperate on hearing that for I can not wait that long. Therefore, I have to require that you send me a new one of the same model within a month.

　　Thank you for your consideration.

　　Sincerely yours,

　　Bu Manyi

　　【名師點評】

　　本文內容要點齊全，語言豐富，結構合理，如頭兩句說明了購買手機后發現故障的情況，中間部分說明了無法維修而必須讓公司更換手機的原委，最后明確提出自己的要求，明白流暢，將題目所提出的要點全部表達清楚，較好的完成了任務。全文以一般過去時為基調，結合主動語態與被動語態，并使用了so, but, therefore 等連接詞，使文章結構完整嚴密。固定短語，如be sold out ,at least, had no choice but to go, to my disappointment, on hearing that 等的使用，使文章的語言顯得地道而精煉。

　　積累卡片英漢互譯

　　好詞1. disappointment n.失望 2.desperate adj.絕望的3. consideration n.體諒

　　好句To my disappointment ,he said since it was a new model in China, it was impossible to fix it without the right spare parts.

　　令我失望的是，他說因為在中國是新款手機，所以沒有配件來修理。

　　評析：復雜句的組織; to my disappointment, 常用短語。

　　2007高考英語滿分作文

　　【全國卷II】

　　【試題回放】

　　一家賓館新開業，為吸引外國賓客，希望在互聯網上進行宣傳。請你用英語為其 寫一篇文字介紹。主要內容包括：

　　1.地點：距白山入口處500米;

　　2.房間及價格：單人間，100元/天;雙人間，150元/天;熱水淋浴;3.餐飲：餐廳，咖啡廳;4.游泳池：全天免費開放; 5.歡迎預定。

　　注意：1.詞數100左右，開頭語已為你寫好;2.可適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。

　　Welcome to Baishan Mountain Hotel!

　　Baishan Mountain Hotel is now open for business.

　　500 meters far from the entrance of Baishan Mountain, it provides single?person room, of which the price is RMB100 yuan per day and the number is 20, and 15 double? person rooms, with a price of RMB 150 yuan per day. It also provides hot water bath service. You can enjoy both Chinese and western food in the restaurant and drink coffee and tea in the cafe. The swimming pool is open for free the whole day. All these services can bring great convenience to you and are very enjoyable. So come to enjoy yourself!

　　Welcome to book rooms in Baishan Mountain.

　　【名師點評】

　　本文開門見山，首先點明了主旨。本文最大的特點是應用了很多比較復雜的句式，使文章比較出彩。開頭使用了獨立結構交代賓館位置。which引導的非限制性定語從句的使用也很正確。總地來說，文章句式精煉，是篇不錯的滿分作文。

　　積累卡片英漢互譯

　　好詞　1. provide v.提供2. convenience n.便利

　　好句All these services can bring great convenience to you and are

　　very enjoyable.所有這些服務都會給你帶來便利，并且非常的愉快。

　　評析：bring great convenience，帶來便利。

　　【安徽卷】

　　【試題回放】

　　假如你是李華，美國一所友好學校準備與你們學校共同創辦一份中學生英文刊物，該校格林先生來信詢問有關情況。請你給她寫封回信，假如你是李華，美國一所友好學校準備與你們學校共同創辦一份中學生英文刊物，該校格林先生來信詢問有關情況。請你給她寫封回信，主要內容如下：

　　l 表示贊成。

　　l 提出你喜歡的欄目。

　　l 簡要說明理由。

　　注意：