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1 Futurism, an early twentieth-century movement in art, rejected all traditions and attempts to glorify contemporary life by emphasizing the machine and motion.
2 But, for a small group of students, professional training might be the way to go since well-developing skills, all other factors being equal, can be the difference between having a job or not.
3 For a group of remaining in existence, a profit-making organization must, in the long run, produces something consumers consider useful or desirable.
4 For a result of two or three centuries of scientific investigation we have come to believe that Nature is understandable in the sense that when we ask her questions by way of appropriate observations and experiments，she will answer truly and reward us with discoveries that endure.
5 At the same time, young people should be encourage to communicate with their peers and develop their interpersonal skills, which may help them greatly to reduce dependence in their parents.
6 When a new movement in art attains a certain fashion, it is advisable to find out what their advocates are aiming at, for, however farfetched and unreasonable their principles may seem today, it is possible that in years to come they may be regarded as normal.
7 Numerous other commercial enterprises, from theaters to magazine publishers, from gas and electric utilities to milk processors, bring better and more efficiently services to consumers through the use of computers.
8 The American economic system is, organizing around a basically private-enterprise, market-oriented economy in that consumers largely determine what shall be produced by spending their money in the marketplace for those goods and services that they want most.
9 Thus, in the American economic system it is the demand of individual consumers, coupled with the desire of businessmen to maximize profits and the desire of individuals to maximize their incomes, which together determine what shall be produced and how resources are used to produce it.
10 The individual now has more information available than any generation, and the task of finding that one information relevant to his or her specific problem is complicated, time--consuming, and sometimes even overwhelming.
參考答案
1Futurism, an early twentieth-century movement in art, rejected all traditions and attempts to glorify contemporary life by emphasizing the machine and motion.
錯誤: and并列連接兩個謂語，應該是平行結構。所以attempts應該改為attempted.
2 But, for a small group of students, professional training might be the way to go since well-developing skills, all other factors being equal, can be the difference between having a job or not.
錯誤: 培養良好的技能不是well-developing而是well-developed.
3 For a group of remaining in existence, a profit-making organization must, in the long run, produces something consumers consider useful or desirable.
錯誤: For a group of remaining in existence應該是For a group to remain in existence.只有后者才可以做一個目的狀語。produces應該是produce，因為在插入語in the long run的前邊有must.
4 For a result of two or three centuries of scientific investigation， we have come to believe that Nature is understandable in the sense that when we ask her questions by way of appropriate observations and experiments，she will answer truly and reward us with discoveries that endure.
錯誤: For a result of應該是As a result of.介詞搭配不當.
5 At the same time, young people should be encourage to communicate with their peers and develop their interpersonal skills, which may help them greatly to reduce dependence in their parents.
錯誤: should be encourage應該是should be encouraged,情態動詞的被動語態. dependence in應該是dependence on, 介詞搭配不當.
6 When a new movement in art attains a certain fashion, it is advisable to find out what their advocates are aiming at, for, however farfetched and unreasonable their principles may seem today, it is possible that in years to come they may be regarded as normal.
錯誤: their advocates應該是its advocates. Its在這里指代的是a new movement in art.所以不能是their.
7 Numerous other commercial enterprises, from theaters to magazine publishers, from gas and electric utilities to milk processors, bring better and more efficiently services to consumers through the use of computers.
錯誤: efficiently services應該是efficient services. 這也是許多學生經常犯的一個錯誤。副詞不能修飾名詞，必須得改為形容詞。
8 The American economic system is, organizing around a basically private-enterprise, market-oriented economy in that consumers largely determine what shall be produced by spending their money in the marketplace for those goods and services that they want most.
錯誤: organizing around a basically private-enterprise應該是organized around a basically private-enterprise.這里應該是過去分詞來做一個伴隨狀語，而不應該是現在分詞，因為它是主語的承受者。in that應該是in which.因為只有in which才能引導一個定語從句。in which=where, 在引導一個定語從句時，后面需要加上一個完整句。而in that只能引導一個狀語從句=because.
9 Thus, in the American economic system it is the demand of individual consumers, coupled with the desire of businessmen to maximize profits and the desire of individuals to maximize their incomes, which together determine what shall be produced and how resources are used to produce it.
錯誤: which應該是that.與前面的it is構成一個強調句型。強調原句中的主語。
10 The individual now has more information available than any generation, and the task of finding that one information relevant to his or her specific problem is complicated, time--consuming, and sometimes even overwhelming.
錯誤: one information應該是one piece of information. 因為information是不可數名詞，前面必須加量詞修飾。
11 While talking to you, your could-be employers is deciding whether your education, your experience, and other qualifications will pay him to employ you and your wares and abilities must be displayed in an orderly and reasonably connected manner.
12 With economic growth has come centralization: fully 76 percent of Japans 119 million citizens lives in cities which community and the extended family have been abandoned in favor of isolated, tow-generation households.
13 After six months of arguing and final 16 hours of hot parliamentary debates, Australias Northern Territory became the first legal authority in the world to allow doctors to take the lives of incurably ill patients whom wish to die.
14 The great interest in exceptional children shown in public education over the past three decades indicate the strong feeling in our society that all citizens, whatever his special conditions, deserve the opportunity to fully develop their capabilities.
15 Your humor must be relevant with the audience and should help to show them that you are one of them or that you understand their situation and are in sympathy with their point of view.
16 The people who get on in this world are the people who get up and look for circumstances they want, and if they cannot find them, make them. Such is the remark made by Bernard Shaw, a great writer. This view has been shared now by more and more people.
17 The current passion to making children compete against their classmates or against the clock produce a two-layer system, in which competitive A-types seem in some way better than their B type fellows
18 Science moves forward, they say, not so much through the insights of great men of genius as because of more ordinary things like improving techniques and tools.
19 The shareholders as such have no knowledge of the lives, thoughts or needs of the workmen employing by the company in which he hold shares, and his influence on the relations of capital and labor are not good.
20 During the discussion of rock singing verses at last months stockholders meeting, Levin assert that music is not the cause of societys ills and even cited his son, a teacher in the Bronx, New York, who uses rap to communicate with students.
參考答案
11 While talking to you, your could-be employers is deciding whether your education, your experience, and other qualifications will pay him to employ you and your wares and abilities must be displayed in an orderly and reasonably connected manner.
錯誤: While talking to you在這里沒錯。當主句的主語和狀語從句的指代的是同一個人或物時，狀語從句的主語可以省略，這就是狀語從句省略結構。your could-be employers is應該是your could-be employers are.否則主謂不一致。pay him應該是pay him or her.
12 With economic growth has come centralization: fully 76 percent of Japans 119 million citizens lives in cities which community and the extended family have been abandoned in favor of isolated, tow-generation households.
錯誤: 119 million citizens lives應該是119 million citizens live. 否則主謂不一致。which應該是where或in which. which引導的定語從句應該是一個不完整的句子，where或in which的后面才能加上一個完整句
13 After six months of arguing and final 16 hours of hot parliamentary debates, Australias Northern Territory became the first legal authority in the world to allow doctors to take the lives of incurably ill patients whom wish to die.
錯誤: whom wish to die應該是who wish to die. whom引導的定語從句應該是一個不完整的句子，whom在定語從句中只能做賓語。而在who引導的定語從句，who既可以做主語，也可以做賓語。
14 The great interest in exceptional children shown in public education over the past three decades indicate the strong feeling in our society that all citizens, whatever his special conditions, deserve the opportunity to fully develop their capabilities.
錯誤: Indicate應該是indicates.因為該句的主語是The great interest。否則主謂不一致。whatever his special conditions應該是whatever their special conditions. Their在這里指代all citizens。
15 Your humor must be relevant with the audience and should help to show them that you are one of them or that you understand their situation and are in sympathy with their point of view.
錯誤: must be relevant with應該是must be relevant to. 介詞搭配不當.
16 The people who get on in this world are the people who get up and look for circumstances they want, and if they cannot find them, make them. Such is the remark made by Bernard Shaw, a great writer. This view has been shared now by more and more people.
錯誤: This view has been shared now應該是This view is shared now或者This view is now being shared.已經有了明確的時間狀語now，所以這里只能用一般現在時或者現在進行時的被動語態。
17 The current passion to making children compete against their classmates or against the clock produce a two-layer system, in which competitive A-types seem in some way better than their B type fellows
錯誤: The current passion to應該是The current passion for. 介詞搭配不當. produce應該是produces，因為該句話的主語是The current passion。否則主謂不一致。
18 Science moves forward, they say, not so much through the insights of great men of genius as because of more ordinary things like improving techniques and tools.
錯誤: improving techniques and tools應該是improved techniques and tools.用過去分詞或現在分詞做狀語時，要注意它們與被修飾名詞的關系。這里講得是被改進過的技術和工具，所以應該是improved techniques and tools而不是improving techniques and tools。
19 The shareholders as such have no knowledge of the lives, thoughts or needs of the workmen employing by the company in which he hold shares, and his influence on the relations of capital and labor are not good.
錯誤: employing by the company應該是employed by the company.過去分詞做后置定語時，相當于一個省略了的定語從句。所以這里的employed by the company相當于who are employed by the company. he hold shares應該是they hold shares.因為這里的they指代的是The shareholders。his influence on the relations應該是their influences on the relations. Their在這里也是指代The shareholders。
20 During the discussion of rock singing verses at last months stockholders meeting, Levin assert that music is not the cause of societys ills and even cited his son, a teacher in the Bronx, New York, who uses rap to communicate with students.
錯誤: and并列連接兩個謂語，應該是平行結構。 assert應該是asserted.
1 Futurism, an early twentieth-century movement in art, rejected all traditions and attempts to glorify contemporary life by emphasizing the machine and motion.
2 But, for a small group of students, professional training might be the way to go since well-developing skills, all other factors being equal, can be the difference between having a job or not.
3 For a group of remaining in existence, a profit-making organization must, in the long run, produces something consumers consider useful or desirable.
4 For a result of two or three centuries of scientific investigation we have come to believe that Nature is understandable in the sense that when we ask her questions by way of appropriate observations and experiments，she will answer truly and reward us with discoveries that endure.
5 At the same time, young people should be encourage to communicate with their peers and develop their interpersonal skills, which may help them greatly to reduce dependence in their parents.
6 When a new movement in art attains a certain fashion, it is advisable to find out what their advocates are aiming at, for, however farfetched and unreasonable their principles may seem today, it is possible that in years to come they may be regarded as normal.
7 Numerous other commercial enterprises, from theaters to magazine publishers, from gas and electric utilities to milk processors, bring better and more efficiently services to consumers through the use of computers.
8 The American economic system is, organizing around a basically private-enterprise, market-oriented economy in that consumers largely determine what shall be produced by spending their money in the marketplace for those goods and services that they want most.
9 Thus, in the American economic system it is the demand of individual consumers, coupled with the desire of businessmen to maximize profits and the desire of individuals to maximize their incomes, which together determine what shall be produced and how resources are used to produce it.
10 The individual now has more information available than any generation, and the task of finding that one information relevant to his or her specific problem is complicated, time--consuming, and sometimes even overwhelming.
參考答案
1Futurism, an early twentieth-century movement in art, rejected all traditions and attempts to glorify contemporary life by emphasizing the machine and motion.
錯誤: and并列連接兩個謂語，應該是平行結構。所以attempts應該改為attempted.
2 But, for a small group of students, professional training might be the way to go since well-developing skills, all other factors being equal, can be the difference between having a job or not.
錯誤: 培養良好的技能不是well-developing而是well-developed.
3 For a group of remaining in existence, a profit-making organization must, in the long run, produces something consumers consider useful or desirable.
錯誤: For a group of remaining in existence應該是For a group to remain in existence.只有后者才可以做一個目的狀語。produces應該是produce，因為在插入語in the long run的前邊有must.
4 For a result of two or three centuries of scientific investigation， we have come to believe that Nature is understandable in the sense that when we ask her questions by way of appropriate observations and experiments，she will answer truly and reward us with discoveries that endure.
錯誤: For a result of應該是As a result of.介詞搭配不當.
5 At the same time, young people should be encourage to communicate with their peers and develop their interpersonal skills, which may help them greatly to reduce dependence in their parents.
錯誤: should be encourage應該是should be encouraged,情態動詞的被動語態. dependence in應該是dependence on, 介詞搭配不當.
6 When a new movement in art attains a certain fashion, it is advisable to find out what their advocates are aiming at, for, however farfetched and unreasonable their principles may seem today, it is possible that in years to come they may be regarded as normal.
錯誤: their advocates應該是its advocates. Its在這里指代的是a new movement in art.所以不能是their.
7 Numerous other commercial enterprises, from theaters to magazine publishers, from gas and electric utilities to milk processors, bring better and more efficiently services to consumers through the use of computers.
錯誤: efficiently services應該是efficient services. 這也是許多學生經常犯的一個錯誤。副詞不能修飾名詞，必須得改為形容詞。
8 The American economic system is, organizing around a basically private-enterprise, market-oriented economy in that consumers largely determine what shall be produced by spending their money in the marketplace for those goods and services that they want most.
錯誤: organizing around a basically private-enterprise應該是organized around a basically private-enterprise.這里應該是過去分詞來做一個伴隨狀語，而不應該是現在分詞，因為它是主語的承受者。in that應該是in which.因為只有in which才能引導一個定語從句。in which=where, 在引導一個定語從句時，后面需要加上一個完整句。而in that只能引導一個狀語從句=because.
9 Thus, in the American economic system it is the demand of individual consumers, coupled with the desire of businessmen to maximize profits and the desire of individuals to maximize their incomes, which together determine what shall be produced and how resources are used to produce it.
錯誤: which應該是that.與前面的it is構成一個強調句型。強調原句中的主語。
10 The individual now has more information available than any generation, and the task of finding that one information relevant to his or her specific problem is complicated, time--consuming, and sometimes even overwhelming.
錯誤: one information應該是one piece of information. 因為information是不可數名詞，前面必須加量詞修飾。
11 While talking to you, your could-be employers is deciding whether your education, your experience, and other qualifications will pay him to employ you and your wares and abilities must be displayed in an orderly and reasonably connected manner.
12 With economic growth has come centralization: fully 76 percent of Japans 119 million citizens lives in cities which community and the extended family have been abandoned in favor of isolated, tow-generation households.
13 After six months of arguing and final 16 hours of hot parliamentary debates, Australias Northern Territory became the first legal authority in the world to allow doctors to take the lives of incurably ill patients whom wish to die.
14 The great interest in exceptional children shown in public education over the past three decades indicate the strong feeling in our society that all citizens, whatever his special conditions, deserve the opportunity to fully develop their capabilities.
15 Your humor must be relevant with the audience and should help to show them that you are one of them or that you understand their situation and are in sympathy with their point of view.
16 The people who get on in this world are the people who get up and look for circumstances they want, and if they cannot find them, make them. Such is the remark made by Bernard Shaw, a great writer. This view has been shared now by more and more people.
17 The current passion to making children compete against their classmates or against the clock produce a two-layer system, in which competitive A-types seem in some way better than their B type fellows
18 Science moves forward, they say, not so much through the insights of great men of genius as because of more ordinary things like improving techniques and tools.
19 The shareholders as such have no knowledge of the lives, thoughts or needs of the workmen employing by the company in which he hold shares, and his influence on the relations of capital and labor are not good.
20 During the discussion of rock singing verses at last months stockholders meeting, Levin assert that music is not the cause of societys ills and even cited his son, a teacher in the Bronx, New York, who uses rap to communicate with students.
參考答案
11 While talking to you, your could-be employers is deciding whether your education, your experience, and other qualifications will pay him to employ you and your wares and abilities must be displayed in an orderly and reasonably connected manner.
錯誤: While talking to you在這里沒錯。當主句的主語和狀語從句的指代的是同一個人或物時，狀語從句的主語可以省略，這就是狀語從句省略結構。your could-be employers is應該是your could-be employers are.否則主謂不一致。pay him應該是pay him or her.
12 With economic growth has come centralization: fully 76 percent of Japans 119 million citizens lives in cities which community and the extended family have been abandoned in favor of isolated, tow-generation households.
錯誤: 119 million citizens lives應該是119 million citizens live. 否則主謂不一致。which應該是where或in which. which引導的定語從句應該是一個不完整的句子，where或in which的后面才能加上一個完整句
13 After six months of arguing and final 16 hours of hot parliamentary debates, Australias Northern Territory became the first legal authority in the world to allow doctors to take the lives of incurably ill patients whom wish to die.
錯誤: whom wish to die應該是who wish to die. whom引導的定語從句應該是一個不完整的句子，whom在定語從句中只能做賓語。而在who引導的定語從句，who既可以做主語，也可以做賓語。
14 The great interest in exceptional children shown in public education over the past three decades indicate the strong feeling in our society that all citizens, whatever his special conditions, deserve the opportunity to fully develop their capabilities.
錯誤: Indicate應該是indicates.因為該句的主語是The great interest。否則主謂不一致。whatever his special conditions應該是whatever their special conditions. Their在這里指代all citizens。
15 Your humor must be relevant with the audience and should help to show them that you are one of them or that you understand their situation and are in sympathy with their point of view.
錯誤: must be relevant with應該是must be relevant to. 介詞搭配不當.
16 The people who get on in this world are the people who get up and look for circumstances they want, and if they cannot find them, make them. Such is the remark made by Bernard Shaw, a great writer. This view has been shared now by more and more people.
錯誤: This view has been shared now應該是This view is shared now或者This view is now being shared.已經有了明確的時間狀語now，所以這里只能用一般現在時或者現在進行時的被動語態。
17 The current passion to making children compete against their classmates or against the clock produce a two-layer system, in which competitive A-types seem in some way better than their B type fellows
錯誤: The current passion to應該是The current passion for. 介詞搭配不當. produce應該是produces，因為該句話的主語是The current passion。否則主謂不一致。
18 Science moves forward, they say, not so much through the insights of great men of genius as because of more ordinary things like improving techniques and tools.
錯誤: improving techniques and tools應該是improved techniques and tools.用過去分詞或現在分詞做狀語時，要注意它們與被修飾名詞的關系。這里講得是被改進過的技術和工具，所以應該是improved techniques and tools而不是improving techniques and tools。
19 The shareholders as such have no knowledge of the lives, thoughts or needs of the workmen employing by the company in which he hold shares, and his influence on the relations of capital and labor are not good.
錯誤: employing by the company應該是employed by the company.過去分詞做后置定語時，相當于一個省略了的定語從句。所以這里的employed by the company相當于who are employed by the company. he hold shares應該是they hold shares.因為這里的they指代的是The shareholders。his influence on the relations應該是their influences on the relations. Their在這里也是指代The shareholders。
20 During the discussion of rock singing verses at last months stockholders meeting, Levin assert that music is not the cause of societys ills and even cited his son, a teacher in the Bronx, New York, who uses rap to communicate with students.
錯誤: and并列連接兩個謂語，應該是平行結構。 assert應該是asserted.
