2024年高考英語高效書面表達(dá)專題卷：13（含解析）
1．
? 寫作（共兩節(jié)，滿分40分）
第一節(jié)? 基礎(chǔ)寫作（共1小題，滿分15分）
你是某中學(xué)生英文報的通訊員，最近你對武廣高速鐵路客運新干線做了一些采訪調(diào)查。下表是你收集的武廣高速鐵路（the Wuhan-Guangzhou high-speed railway）的有關(guān)情況：
基本情況 始建于2005年，2009年12月26日開通運營，干線全長1068公里，途徑湖北、湖南和廣東三省；列車時速高達(dá)350公里/小時，目前世界上最快。
主要優(yōu)點 武漢至廣州僅需3小時，比先前減少7個多小時；
高鐵列車設(shè)施齊全，安全舒適，更具人性化（humane）；
美中不足 1）票價偏高；2）車站離市中心較遠(yuǎn)。
?[寫作內(nèi)容]
根據(jù)上表寫一篇報道，并包括如下內(nèi)容：
1. 武廣高速鐵路客運新干線的基本情況；
2. 高鐵列車的主要優(yōu)點和不足；
?[寫作要求]
只能使用5個句子表達(dá)全部內(nèi)容。
?[評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)]
句子結(jié)構(gòu)準(zhǔn)確，信息內(nèi)容完整，篇章結(jié)構(gòu)連貫。
8
（2010·湖南同升湖實驗學(xué)校高三第二次月考）
Direction: Write an English composition according to the instructions given below in Chinese
假如你是李華，校園小記者就孩子與家長關(guān)系調(diào)查結(jié)果----大多數(shù)孩子都不愿意與家長交流，不愿意告訴家長內(nèi)心想法的問題來采訪你。
1.請你介紹你同學(xué)中與家長之間的不和諧狀況并分析原因。
2.表明你所希望的孩子與家長的關(guān)系，并說明如何才能建立這種關(guān)系。
注意：1、詞數(shù)不少于120個；
2、可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)；
In the past 15 years, homework assignments(布置) have risen by 51% according to a 2006 study . That is an average（平均）of 12 extre hours of homework per week! Excessive homework often leaves no time for students to have fun or do something for themselves. Many parents spend at least three hours every night going through their chidren’s homework.
Sometimes parents ask for more work for their children! When teachers don’t give homework, some parents will go to the school and complain(抱怨). They want teachers to assign homework every day as a means sure teachers do their job and the children have work to do.
【寫作內(nèi)容】
你看了上面的文章，決定以 Homework or No Homework ? 為題就此現(xiàn)象在你校的學(xué)生英文刊物 Viewpoints 上發(fā)表文章談自己的觀點，具體內(nèi)容如下：
1. 以約30個詞概括上文所述現(xiàn)象；
2. 以約120個詞談你對 homework 的看法，并包括如下要點：
（1）你對家庭作業(yè)必要性的認(rèn)識；
（2）你對過重的家庭作業(yè)負(fù)擔(dān)的看法；
（3）概述你的觀點。
4．
假如你是李華，在十一旅游期間入住北京友誼賓館301房間，10月2日入住，6日退房。你回家后發(fā)現(xiàn)一個中等大小的藍(lán)色背包遺失在那里，內(nèi)有幾本參考書籍，一個白色限量版ipod,一張信用卡和少量現(xiàn)金。請用英文給該賓館外籍經(jīng)理寫一封信，請他幫忙尋找并寄回。
信件要點包括：1.陳述寫信原因；
2.簡要描述該背包；
3.說明其重要性；
4.期待回復(fù)并感謝。
注意：1.150詞左右；
2.信件格式已給出。
Dear Sir,
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
2024倫敦奧運會已進入籌備工作，倫敦奧組委現(xiàn)向世界各地招募志愿者，招募具體情況見海報。
VOLUNTEER POST We are looking for applications for the following posts:
*translator or interpreter
*social volunteer
*stadium volunteer
*transportation volunteer
2024 Olympic Committee
假如你是劉明，17歲，現(xiàn)是哈爾濱市第六中學(xué)高三年級的一名學(xué)生，請根據(jù)上面海報中自己感興趣的一個志愿者工作給倫敦奧組委寫回信，應(yīng)征其中的一項志愿者工作。回信要求包括如下內(nèi)容：
1、個人信息：名字（LiuMing），年齡，身份；2、你的性格特點；3、你的興趣、愛好、特長；4、你的相關(guān)經(jīng)歷。
注意：信的開頭、結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出(不計入詞數(shù))
Dear 2024 Olympic Committee,
I am writing to apply for a position at your Volunteer Post. _________________________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________________
I am looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Liu Ming
參考答案
1．
The Wuhan-Guangzhou high-speed railway, first built in 2005, went into operation on Dec. 26th,2009. The high-speed line, which covers a distance of 1086 kilometres, runs across three provinces: Hubei, Hunan and Guangong. The most exciting thing is that the train can reach a speed of 350 km per hour, which is now the fastest in the world and thus shortens (cuts) the travel time between Guangzhou and Wuhan from ten hours to only three! Moreover, the high-speed train is well-equipped with all necessary facilities and is more humane as well as safe and comfortable.
However, what is not so satisfactory is that the fares are a lttle too high for common people and the station is relatively far from the city centre.
【解析】
2．
One possible version:
Nowadays, most of my classmates aren’t willing to communicate with their parents or share their inner thoughts with their parents and always find it hard to seek support and advice from them, the reason of which is that they feel that they are not equal in position and parents lay too much emphasis on the children’s study.
In my opinion, the relationship between parents and children should be one filled with love, care and understanding, in which parents and children are equal and they can show respect for each other and exchange ideas freely. To build a relationship of this kind , parents should become friends of their children while children ought to place more trust in their teachers and give voice to their inner feelings frankly. Only in this way can we enjoy a warm relationship between parents and children.
（132 words）
【解析】
3．One possible version:
Homework or No Homework
Today, both students and parents are suffering from excessive homework. However, while the government is trying to relieve students’ burden, some parents complain about the small amount of homework and ask for more
Personally, I don’t think the function of homework can be ignored. Homework is a means for teachers to find out whether or not their students understand the lessons .What’s more, practice makes perfect. The more questions they practice, the less painful they fell during exams. To some extent, minimizing the amount of homework may encourage students to be lazy.
However, excessive homework is harmful. Students cannot enjoy their leisure time which is occupied by countless assignments and sometimes they have to copy homework from each other in order to finish it on time .All work and no play makes John a dull boy .Students should have more time for leisure activities like reading and sports.
On balance, homework is necessary but the amount must not be a burden for students.
【解析】 略
4．
Dear Sir，
I’m so grateful for your good service during my stay in Beijing for a tour, but I’m writing to ask a fa-vor to find and send back my pack which I left in your hotel.
I checked in on Oct,2 and out on Oct ,6. Setting off in a rush for the station, I left the pack in Room 301. It’s a medium-sized, blue, leather backpack which contains some books that are wanted in reviewing NMET, a white ipod of special edition, a credit card some cash. All in the pack matters to me, especially the ipod, a precious gift from my father on my 18th birthday. So much do I cherish it that I feel upset for its loss.
If you find it, would you please post it to me? The return address is on the envelope.
I’ll appreciate it very much if you can give me your earliest reply and thank you for anything you can do for me.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】
試題分析：
作文以寫郵件的形式，注意郵件格式，認(rèn)真審題，知道要點內(nèi)容，把要點加以整理，用適當(dāng)?shù)木湫瓦M行概括；概括時可以主要用簡單句，也可以適當(dāng)用復(fù)雜句，但要確保復(fù)雜句使用正確；切記要點要全，不要遺漏；注意語法正確，單詞拼寫正確，字體干凈。
5．Dear 2024 Olympic Committee,
I am writing to apply for a position at your Volunteer Post. I would be interested in the work as a interpreter. I’m LiuMing. I’m 17 this year. I’m a student in Harbin No.6 High School Senior Three. I’m very cheerful and lively, and I like to make friends with people. I want to get the work of interpreter, because I like to speak English and read English novels. My favourite sports are skating and swimming, so I often go to skating or swimming with friends at weekend. It helps me have a keen mind to report something on a fast speed and have a strong body to work day and night. I had got the first prize in the English speech contest of our school when I was fourteen. I also had got the second prize in the English speech competition of our city when I was fifteen. If I get the work, I will work hard, make some contribution to 2024 London Olympic Games. I am looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
LiuMing
【解析】本文是一封對倫敦奧運會志愿者的申請書，不僅寫清楚自己的個人信息，性格特點，興趣愛好，還要寫清楚的相關(guān)經(jīng)歷。并且說明自己申請的是什么職位的志愿者。為什申請這個職位的志愿者？最后還要表示如果得到此位置，我該如何工作。
1．
? 寫作（共兩節(jié)，滿分40分）
第一節(jié)? 基礎(chǔ)寫作（共1小題，滿分15分）
你是某中學(xué)生英文報的通訊員，最近你對武廣高速鐵路客運新干線做了一些采訪調(diào)查。下表是你收集的武廣高速鐵路（the Wuhan-Guangzhou high-speed railway）的有關(guān)情況：
基本情況 始建于2005年，2009年12月26日開通運營，干線全長1068公里，途徑湖北、湖南和廣東三省；列車時速高達(dá)350公里/小時，目前世界上最快。
主要優(yōu)點 武漢至廣州僅需3小時，比先前減少7個多小時；
高鐵列車設(shè)施齊全，安全舒適，更具人性化（humane）；
美中不足 1）票價偏高；2）車站離市中心較遠(yuǎn)。
?[寫作內(nèi)容]
根據(jù)上表寫一篇報道，并包括如下內(nèi)容：
1. 武廣高速鐵路客運新干線的基本情況；
2. 高鐵列車的主要優(yōu)點和不足；
?[寫作要求]
只能使用5個句子表達(dá)全部內(nèi)容。
?[評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)]
句子結(jié)構(gòu)準(zhǔn)確，信息內(nèi)容完整，篇章結(jié)構(gòu)連貫。
8
（2010·湖南同升湖實驗學(xué)校高三第二次月考）
Direction: Write an English composition according to the instructions given below in Chinese
假如你是李華，校園小記者就孩子與家長關(guān)系調(diào)查結(jié)果----大多數(shù)孩子都不愿意與家長交流，不愿意告訴家長內(nèi)心想法的問題來采訪你。
1.請你介紹你同學(xué)中與家長之間的不和諧狀況并分析原因。
2.表明你所希望的孩子與家長的關(guān)系，并說明如何才能建立這種關(guān)系。
注意：1、詞數(shù)不少于120個；
2、可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)；
In the past 15 years, homework assignments(布置) have risen by 51% according to a 2006 study . That is an average（平均）of 12 extre hours of homework per week! Excessive homework often leaves no time for students to have fun or do something for themselves. Many parents spend at least three hours every night going through their chidren’s homework.
Sometimes parents ask for more work for their children! When teachers don’t give homework, some parents will go to the school and complain(抱怨). They want teachers to assign homework every day as a means sure teachers do their job and the children have work to do.
【寫作內(nèi)容】
你看了上面的文章，決定以 Homework or No Homework ? 為題就此現(xiàn)象在你校的學(xué)生英文刊物 Viewpoints 上發(fā)表文章談自己的觀點，具體內(nèi)容如下：
1. 以約30個詞概括上文所述現(xiàn)象；
2. 以約120個詞談你對 homework 的看法，并包括如下要點：
（1）你對家庭作業(yè)必要性的認(rèn)識；
（2）你對過重的家庭作業(yè)負(fù)擔(dān)的看法；
（3）概述你的觀點。
4．
假如你是李華，在十一旅游期間入住北京友誼賓館301房間，10月2日入住，6日退房。你回家后發(fā)現(xiàn)一個中等大小的藍(lán)色背包遺失在那里，內(nèi)有幾本參考書籍，一個白色限量版ipod,一張信用卡和少量現(xiàn)金。請用英文給該賓館外籍經(jīng)理寫一封信，請他幫忙尋找并寄回。
信件要點包括：1.陳述寫信原因；
2.簡要描述該背包；
3.說明其重要性；
4.期待回復(fù)并感謝。
注意：1.150詞左右；
2.信件格式已給出。
Dear Sir,
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
2024倫敦奧運會已進入籌備工作，倫敦奧組委現(xiàn)向世界各地招募志愿者，招募具體情況見海報。
VOLUNTEER POST We are looking for applications for the following posts:
*translator or interpreter
*social volunteer
*stadium volunteer
*transportation volunteer
2024 Olympic Committee
假如你是劉明，17歲，現(xiàn)是哈爾濱市第六中學(xué)高三年級的一名學(xué)生，請根據(jù)上面海報中自己感興趣的一個志愿者工作給倫敦奧組委寫回信，應(yīng)征其中的一項志愿者工作。回信要求包括如下內(nèi)容：
1、個人信息：名字（LiuMing），年齡，身份；2、你的性格特點；3、你的興趣、愛好、特長；4、你的相關(guān)經(jīng)歷。
注意：信的開頭、結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出(不計入詞數(shù))
Dear 2024 Olympic Committee,
I am writing to apply for a position at your Volunteer Post. _________________________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________________
I am looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Liu Ming
參考答案
1．
The Wuhan-Guangzhou high-speed railway, first built in 2005, went into operation on Dec. 26th,2009. The high-speed line, which covers a distance of 1086 kilometres, runs across three provinces: Hubei, Hunan and Guangong. The most exciting thing is that the train can reach a speed of 350 km per hour, which is now the fastest in the world and thus shortens (cuts) the travel time between Guangzhou and Wuhan from ten hours to only three! Moreover, the high-speed train is well-equipped with all necessary facilities and is more humane as well as safe and comfortable.
However, what is not so satisfactory is that the fares are a lttle too high for common people and the station is relatively far from the city centre.
【解析】
2．
One possible version:
Nowadays, most of my classmates aren’t willing to communicate with their parents or share their inner thoughts with their parents and always find it hard to seek support and advice from them, the reason of which is that they feel that they are not equal in position and parents lay too much emphasis on the children’s study.
In my opinion, the relationship between parents and children should be one filled with love, care and understanding, in which parents and children are equal and they can show respect for each other and exchange ideas freely. To build a relationship of this kind , parents should become friends of their children while children ought to place more trust in their teachers and give voice to their inner feelings frankly. Only in this way can we enjoy a warm relationship between parents and children.
（132 words）
【解析】
3．One possible version:
Homework or No Homework
Today, both students and parents are suffering from excessive homework. However, while the government is trying to relieve students’ burden, some parents complain about the small amount of homework and ask for more
Personally, I don’t think the function of homework can be ignored. Homework is a means for teachers to find out whether or not their students understand the lessons .What’s more, practice makes perfect. The more questions they practice, the less painful they fell during exams. To some extent, minimizing the amount of homework may encourage students to be lazy.
However, excessive homework is harmful. Students cannot enjoy their leisure time which is occupied by countless assignments and sometimes they have to copy homework from each other in order to finish it on time .All work and no play makes John a dull boy .Students should have more time for leisure activities like reading and sports.
On balance, homework is necessary but the amount must not be a burden for students.
【解析】 略
4．
Dear Sir，
I’m so grateful for your good service during my stay in Beijing for a tour, but I’m writing to ask a fa-vor to find and send back my pack which I left in your hotel.
I checked in on Oct,2 and out on Oct ,6. Setting off in a rush for the station, I left the pack in Room 301. It’s a medium-sized, blue, leather backpack which contains some books that are wanted in reviewing NMET, a white ipod of special edition, a credit card some cash. All in the pack matters to me, especially the ipod, a precious gift from my father on my 18th birthday. So much do I cherish it that I feel upset for its loss.
If you find it, would you please post it to me? The return address is on the envelope.
I’ll appreciate it very much if you can give me your earliest reply and thank you for anything you can do for me.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】
試題分析：
作文以寫郵件的形式，注意郵件格式，認(rèn)真審題，知道要點內(nèi)容，把要點加以整理，用適當(dāng)?shù)木湫瓦M行概括；概括時可以主要用簡單句，也可以適當(dāng)用復(fù)雜句，但要確保復(fù)雜句使用正確；切記要點要全，不要遺漏；注意語法正確，單詞拼寫正確，字體干凈。
5．Dear 2024 Olympic Committee,
I am writing to apply for a position at your Volunteer Post. I would be interested in the work as a interpreter. I’m LiuMing. I’m 17 this year. I’m a student in Harbin No.6 High School Senior Three. I’m very cheerful and lively, and I like to make friends with people. I want to get the work of interpreter, because I like to speak English and read English novels. My favourite sports are skating and swimming, so I often go to skating or swimming with friends at weekend. It helps me have a keen mind to report something on a fast speed and have a strong body to work day and night. I had got the first prize in the English speech contest of our school when I was fourteen. I also had got the second prize in the English speech competition of our city when I was fifteen. If I get the work, I will work hard, make some contribution to 2024 London Olympic Games. I am looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
LiuMing
【解析】本文是一封對倫敦奧運會志愿者的申請書，不僅寫清楚自己的個人信息，性格特點，興趣愛好，還要寫清楚的相關(guān)經(jīng)歷。并且說明自己申請的是什么職位的志愿者。為什申請這個職位的志愿者？最后還要表示如果得到此位置，我該如何工作。
