貴州省桐梓縣2024高考英語一輪寫作閱讀練習五

　　（2024高考訓練）書面表達

　　你班將舉行一次以“珍愛生命，遵守交規”為主題的英語演講比賽，請你按擬定的提綱用英語寫一篇演講稿。

　　1．經濟發展，私家車增加；

　　2．違章駕駛，事故頻發(主要原因為酒駕、超速和闖紅燈)；

　　3．提高安全意識，并采取有力措施。

　　注意：1.詞數100～120；

　　2．可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。

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　　【思路導航】

　　本文是限內容、給提綱的控制性作文，由于是寫當下的社會現象，所以時態要以一般現happen或take place，且只能用主動語態不能用被動語態；“采取措施”用英語表達為“take steps(measures/action)”。

　　【參考范文】

　　With the rapid development of China's economy，more and more people own their private cars.Some drivers don't always obey the traffic rules，so traffic accidents are often happening.A recent survey shows in 2024 there are 26 million traffic illegal acts，an average of over 70 thousand a day.

　　Behind the numbers，we can see the seriousness of our country's road safety.The main reason for traffic accidents is drunk driving.Besides，running the red light and speeding also result in this situation.

　　In my point of view，we must take immediate action to reduce the traffic accidents.For example，drivers should be punished without mercy.At the same time，the government should call on people to obey the traffic rules.Only when we cut down the traffic accidents can we live a happier life.

　　[亮點點擊]　此篇文章結構完整，短文使用了較靈活的句式，如簡單句、并列句、狀語從句和倒裝句等，使文章長短句結合，錯落有致。

　　亮點短語和詞組：with the rapid development of，an average of，running the red light，without mercy，take action，call on，cut down，live a happier life。

　　高級句式：倒裝句(Only when we cut down the traffic accidents can we live a happier life.)；被動語態(For example，drivers should be punished without mercy.)。

　　書面表達

　　某英文報近期舉辦以“感恩與我同行”為主題的英語征文大賽。請你根據右圖及提示的內容寫一篇感恩老師的英文短文參賽。

　　主要內容如下：

　　(1)感謝老師的關心鼓勵；

　　(2)感謝老師的辛勤勞動；

　　(3)感謝老師的諄諄教誨；

　　(4)詞數150左右。

　　注意：短文須圍繞“感恩與我同行”的主題。

　　Thanks to You，My Teacher

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　　【參考范文】

　　Thanks_to_You，My_Teacher

　　I would like to thank you for all the help you have given me.You are very friendly to everyone in our class.You always get on very well with us students.

　　What impresses me most is that you are not only our teacher but also our friend.You are always so patient whenever we ask you questions.We are all moved when you listen carefully and explain everything so thoroughly.You show us different ways to learn English.We feel so encouraged and become more comfortable in your class.You make your class so lively and interesting that every one of us is always eager to participate and practice.Our English has improved so much.

　　You teach us not only how to learn English well but also how to be good citizens.We owe much to you，my teacher.

　　書面表達

　　現在全社會都在倡導低碳生活，呵護地球家園。而每年的元宵節，你所在的城市都要舉行一場20分鐘的焰火晚會。據報道：一場這樣的焰火晚會耗資大約150萬元。市民為此議論紛紛。請你以“Is it Wise to Celebrate the Lantern Festival with Fireworks？”為題寫一篇英語短文，談談你對此的看法。

　　要求：1.不要逐字翻譯所給素材；

　　2．為了使行文流暢，可適當發揮；

　　3．詞數120左右。

　　Is it Wise to Celebrate the Lantern Festival with Fireworks?

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　　【參考范文】

　　Is_it_Wise_to_Celebrate_the_Lantern_Festival_with_Fireworks?

　　In China，it's a custom to celebrate the Lantern Festival by setting off fireworks.Is it wise to celebrate the Lantern Festival with fireworks?

　　In my city，there is an annual firework show sponsored by the government.It is true that setting off fireworks does offer relaxation and excitement to the citizens.However，I don't think it is wise to celebrate the Lantern Festival in this way.My reasons are as follows.

　　Firstly，it is really a waste of money.The fireworks last only 30 minutes，but it costs about 1.5 million yuan，which can be used for the city construction.Secondly，while fireworks are wonderful to look at，they cause air pollution.Besides，some unexpected fires might break out，causing heavy damage and loss.

　　In conclusion，celebrating the Lantern Festival with fireworks isn't necessary.

　　【2024高考英語湖北省武昌區調研試題】

　　短文寫作（共1題；滿分30分）

　　請根據以下提示，并結合事例，用英語寫一篇短文。

　　As students in Senior Grade 3,we are under great pressure of the College Entrance Examination and quite often feel depressed． However, if we are realistic about our abilities and o our best to achieve our goals, we can always be happy in school．

　　短文寫作（共1題；滿分30分）

　　Sample writing:

　　How can we be happy under the great pressure of the College Entrance Examination? The answer lies in the fact that we can have an objective understanding of our abilities and set a reasonable goal. Furthermore, what really matters is that we have tried our best to achieve them.

　　In junior middle school, I was one of the top ten students in my school. I was confident and happy. But things have changed since I started senior school. However hard I tried, I was unable to be listed on the top one hundred. I felt stressed and depressed. After thinking carefully, I painfully realized that I was not as smart as I imagined. To my comfort, I have always been doing my best and I have never wasted a single hour.

　　What makes me proud is that all my hard work paid off at last.

　　In our life voyage, we can’t change the direction of the wind, but we can adjust our sails to reach our destinations. Be realistic and hardworking, and we can always be happy enough to live through our hard school life.

　　【2024高考英語湖北省襄陽市統考試題】

　　短文寫作（共1題：滿分30分）

　　請根據以下提示，并結合事例，用英語寫一篇短文。

　　A goal can guide us in the right direction, so a life without a goal is just like a travelling ship without a compass．

　　注意：①無須寫標題，不得照抄英語提示語；

　　②除詩歌外，文體不限；

　　③文中不得透露個人姓名和學校名稱；

　　④詞數為l20左右。

　　短文寫作：

　　一、評分原則：

　　1．本題總分為30分，按5個檔次給分。

　　2．先根據文章內容和語言初步確定其所屬的檔次，然后以該檔次的要求來衡量，確定或調整檔次，最后給分。評分檔次的確定應在內容符合題目要求的前提下側重于語言的表達

　　3．詞數少于100的，將分數降低一個檔次。

　　4．評分時主要關注：內容切題，語言表達準確、多樣、連貫、得體。

　　5．拼寫與標點符號，應視其對交際的影響程度予以考慮，但英美拼寫及詞匯用法均可接受。

　　6．書寫較差，以至于影響交際，將分數降低一個檔次。

　　二、書面表達各檔次的劃分及給分范圍

　　第五檔（很好）：（25～30分） 要點完整，表達清楚，無重大語法錯誤

　　完全完成了試題規定的任務。 —所有內容與提示吻合。 —應用了較豐富的語法結構和詞匯。 —語法結構或詞匯運用準確，雖有個別錯誤，但不影響意義的表達，具備較強的語言運用能力。 —恰當地使用了語句間的連接成分，全文結構緊湊。 完全達到了預期的寫作目的。

　　第四檔（好）：（19～24分） 表達基本清楚，缺少個別要點，有些語法錯誤。

　　完成了試題規定的任務。 —主要內容與提示吻合。 —應用的語法結構和詞匯能滿足任務的要求。 —語法結構或詞匯方面應用基本準確，個別錯誤對意義的表達—影響。

　　--較恰當地使用了語句間的連接成分，全文結構較緊湊。 達到了預期的寫作目的。

　　第三檔（適當）：（13～18分）尚能表達，缺少多個要點，語法錯誤較多。

　　基本完成了試題規定的任務。 —主要內容與提示比較吻合。 —應用的語法結構和詞匯能滿足任務的要求。 —有一些語法結構和詞匯的錯誤，對意義的表達有較大影響。 —基本能使用語句間的連接成分，全文結構比較松散。 整體而言，基本達到了預期的寫作目的。

　　第二檔（較差）：（7～12分）表達含糊不清，不能成篇。

　　未恰當完成試題規定的任務。 —主要內容與提示基本吻合。 —語法結構單調，應用詞匯有限。 —有較多語法結構或詞匯方面的錯誤，影響了意義的表達。 —語句間的連接成分運用不當，缺少連貫性。 信息未能清楚地傳達給讀者。

　　第一檔（差）：（1～6分）動了筆，僅羅列了一些無關內容，原因可能是未理解試題要求。

　　未能完成試題規定的任務。 —主要內容與提示不太吻合 —語法結構單一，應用詞匯項十分有限。 —較多語法結構或詞匯方面的嚴重錯誤，嚴重影響了意義的表達。 —缺乏語法之間的連接成分，內容不連貫。 信息未能傳達給讀者。

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　　未能傳達給讀者任何信息，內容太少，無法評判；寫的內容均與所要求內容無關或所寫內容無法看清。

　　One possible version:

　　In order to succeed ,we should realize the importance of life goal ．Without a clear goal ,we will feel confused and lost while if a goal is set ,we may make a sensible schedule and confirm to it ．

　　I was not aware what I wanted to chase until the discussion what is My Chinese Dream was held in my class last term． I used to believe that it made no difference whether I studied hard or not to our nation． The fate of a country had nothing to do with the individual student． Fortunately, because of the hot discussion from my classmates, I have transformed my mind． Now, I’m conscious I have to devote all my passion to achieving my personal goal as well as to striving for the great revival of the motherland．

　　With the life goal set, we can achieve anything we want．

　　(由2024·湖北卷)

　　You've flown halfway around the world；you've sniffed out this place that nobody in Falongland or Thailand seems to have ever heard of；so what on earth is there to do here？You consider this question as you sink into an old wooden beach chair that holds you above the sand.

　　It was a long journey from Bangkok to Huaplee.By the time you found the bus station and got yourself sorted out，it took almost as long as the flight from Falongland.

　　Huaplee is located just south of Hua Hin，about two hundred kilometres from Bangkok，down the west side of the Gulf of Thailand. Not many tourists find this place，and the ones that do wonder if finding it has been their purpose all along.

　　There's an apparent laziness that surrounds you here.It's what this place offers，and it's free of charge.The small waves that tap the shoreline seem to slow everything down.You settle into your beach chair in preparation for a long rest.You sit there and watch the sea.

　　It's early afternoon，so the cook comes out and asks what you'd like to eat this evening.Before long he's rushed off to the market to buy the ingredients for whatever it was that you ordered－every meal fresh and to order.No menu here.

　　There is no poolside noise here but just that wonderfully warm，clear blue sea.There's no street noise.The only sounds are the murmurs of nature.

　　For now you just count your blessings (福祉)，listing them in the sand with your toe (腳趾)．You don't have to worry about being late for work. You don't have to do anything.

　　The beach to your right stretches off to the horizon (地平線)，slowly narrowing to nothingness only to reemerge again on your left，now steadily widening until it covers the chair beneath you.Sand to your left and sand to your right; it's unbroken，endless.No start，no end，just sand，sun，and peace.Step off it，and you re-enter the world of traffic，stress，work，and hurry.

　　Normally you're the type who can't sit still for more than ten minutes，but you're on Huaplee Lazy Beach now and，in the right frame of mind，it stretches all the way around the world.

　　“How could it take me so long to find it？” you wonder.

　　．When the author first went to Huaplee Beach，________.

　　A．he found it unworthwhile

　　B．he failed to sort himself out

　　C．he became sensitive to smell

　　D．he had difficulty in finding it

　　．What is special about the food service at Huaplee Beach?

　　A．No menu.

　　B．Free food.

　　C．Self service.

　　D．Quick delivery.

　　3．In the author's opinion，a tourist can enjoy Huaplee Beach most when he ________.

　　A．sits in a beach chairB．forgets his daily routine

　　C．plans a detailed scheduleD．draws pictures in the sand

　　．What does the author imply by his question at the end of the passage?

　　A．He shouldn't have counted his blessings.

　　B．He should have understood the wonder of nature.

　　C．He shouldn't have spent so much time on the trip.

　　D．He should have come to the place earlier.

　　答案：

　　【語篇解讀】　本文是一篇旅游雜記，介紹了泰國一個靜謐的海灘，描述了這里的環境給人的慵懶的感覺。在這里，你可以忘掉職場上的疲憊和匆忙，也可以真正地無所事事。寧靜的氣息讓你不禁感嘆應該早點兒來這個地方。

　　．D　解析：推理判斷題。作者沒有直接說自己第一次來這里的情況或感受，但他提到了找到這個地方是多么不容易：have flown halfway around the world；a long journey from Bangkok to Huaplee；it took almost as long as the flight from Falongland，因此選D。

　　．A　解析：細節理解題。第五段中的Before long he's rushed off to the market to buy the ingredients for whatever it was that you ordered－every meal fresh and to order.No menu here.意為“不管你點什么菜，不久他就會急忙去市場買原料——每餐都是新鮮的、定做的。沒有菜單”。由此可知A項“沒有菜單”正確，而非“飯菜免費”“自助”或“送餐快速”。