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　　寫作素能培養

　　第三部分 第七講　寫好開頭和結尾， 實現升級策略 第二部分

　　俗話說得好：好的開頭是成功的一半(Well begun is half done)；結尾好，一切都好(All is well that ends well)。一篇英語作文的開頭如果寫得好，就會給閱卷老師良好的印象，吸引他繼續讀下去；如果結尾又寫得好，就會進一步強化閱卷老師對你所寫作文的好感，從而給你的作文打高分。

　　一、如何寫好開頭 開頭一般來說要做到開門見山，使讀者了解文章要談什么，最好能立刻引起讀者的興趣。下面介紹幾種常見的寫法： 1．背景法——說明事件發生的時間、地點、背景等 Last Monday，my father said goodbye to my mother and me and went on a business trip. 上周一，我爸爸向媽媽與我告別，因為他要外出做生意。

　　2．主題句法——提出一個觀點或論據作為文章要闡明和論述的主題 Old people play an important role in our country，because they have experience，they are wiser，and they have enough time. 老年人在我們國家起著重要的作用，因為他們經驗豐富，聰明智慧，時間充足。

　　3．問題法——用提出問題的方法來引出文章的內容，以吸引讀者的注意力 Why do we go to university？Different people have different opinions. 我們為什么要上大學？不同的人有不同的觀點。

　　4．引語法——摘錄或引用某些名人的名言或常見的習語、諺語作為文章的開端 There is an old English saying，“Gain time，gain life”． Then what is time？Time is a kind of thing that we can't see or touch，but we can feel it pass by. 有一個古老的英語諺語“贏得時間，就贏得生命”。 那么，時間是什么呢？時間是一種看不見、摸不著的東西，但是我們能感覺到它的流逝。

　　5．定義法——常見于對標題下定義，然后通過舉例、邏輯推理等方法加以說明 A good student is one who possesses good morality，sound health，perfect knowledge and various abilities. 一個好學生要擁有良好的品德、健全的身體、完美的知識和各種各樣的能力。

　　6．數據法——引用已經證實的某些統計數字來引起話題 The fact that less than 5%of the British population graduate from universities may seem surprising，especially compared with the American percentage of over 30%. 英國人口中大學畢業生所占的比例不足5%的事實看上去很令人吃驚，尤其是和美國的超過30%的比率相比。

　　7．實例法——通過一個實例或現象引出話題 Nowadays，people in many big cities are complaining about heavy traffic.It has seriously influenced people's daily life and economic development. 現今，許多大城市的人們都在抱怨交通擁堵，它嚴重地影響了人們的日常生活和經濟發展。 用上述開頭法翻譯下列句子 1．上周日，我和同學們去了香山公園。 _________________________________________________ _________________________________________________ 2．眼下，街談巷議，人們的熱門話題總離不開“三貴”：買房貴、上學貴、看病貴。 _________________________________________________ _________________________________________________ 3．當有那么多方式可以與學生家長溝通時，家訪還有必要嗎？ _________________________________________________ 4．正如諺語所說的那樣“時間就是金錢”，是的，情況確實就是這樣。 _________________________________________________ _________________________________________________ 5．寵物是人們飼養并將其視為伙伴的動物。 _________________________________________________ _________________________________________________

　　6．最近的研究表明，有50%的學生不吃早飯。 _________________________________________________ _________________________________________________ 7．目前，怎樣處理垃圾是我們城市面臨的一大問題。 _________________________________________________ _________________________________________________

　　答案：1.Last Sunday，my classmates and I went to Xiangshan Park.(背景法) 2．Nowadays it is often talked about that there are three things that people can't afford.It is expensive to buy houses，to pay for the children's education and to see the doctor.(主題句法) 3．Are home visits necessary when there are so many ways to communicate with

　　students' parents？(問題法)

　　4．As the saying goes，“Time is money.” Yes，it's indeed the case.(引語法) 5．A pet is an animal kept by a person as a companion.(定義法) 6．A recent study shows that 50% of the school kids don't have breakfast.(數據法) 7．How to deal with waste is a big problem for our city now.(實例法)

　　二、如何寫好結尾 結尾有概括全文內容，進一步強調或肯定文章的中心思想，升華主題的作用。主要有以下幾種寫法： 1．照應開頭 Everyone enjoys beautiful things.And seeing sunrise may be one of the most unusual experiences in our life. 每個人都喜歡美好的事物，看日出也許是我們人生中最不平凡的經歷中的一次了。 2．復述中心 We must protect the water as well as find ways to reuse it.If not，the last drop of water will be a teardrop. 我們必須保護水源，尋找再利用水的方法，如果不這樣做，最后一滴水將是人類的一滴淚水。 3．總結式 In a word，a friend in need is a friend indeed.May all of us treasure friendship. 總之，患難之交才是真正的朋友，愿我們所有人珍視友誼。 4．引用式 As the saying goes，every coin has two sides. 常言道，任何事情都有兩面性。 5．希望式 The Internet is now very important to me because it not only gives me a lot of fun but also it is very useful.I like it and hope you will like it too. 現在網絡對我來說非常重要，因為它給我帶來很多樂趣，而且非常有用，我喜歡它，希望你也喜歡它。

　　6．問題式 Will you join us in the next century？How romantic and fantastic it will be! 你愿意在下個世紀加入我們嗎？那將是多么浪漫和奇妙啊！

　　用上述結尾法翻譯下列句子 1．不同的旅行方式都能讓人們愉快，但我還是最喜歡乘火車旅行。 _________________________________________________ _________________________________________________ 2．從這次經歷中，我了解到細心非常重要，尤其在考試時，我們怎樣細心都不為過。 _________________________________________________ _________________________________________________ 3．愛是給予，愛是關注他人，我將盡力把我所有的愛奉獻給他人。 _________________________________________________ _________________________________________________ 4．作為一名學生，我非常支持這項活動，因為它很有意義，對學生很有幫助，我希望此類活動在將來能繼續開展下去。 _________________________________________________ _________________________________________________

　　5．找一個伙伴和我們一起去如何？這樣我們可以互相幫助并且在旅途中保持愉快。 _________________________________________________ _________________________________________________ 6．不管怎樣，有不同的文化，就有不同的習俗，如果你能“入鄉隨俗”，就會更好地享受這里的生活。 _________________________________________________ _________________________________________________

　　答案：1.Different ways of traveling can make people happy，but I like traveling by train most.(照應開頭) 2．From this experience，I learned that being careful is very important and that we can't be too careful，especially in examinations.(總結式) 3．Love is giving and love is paying attention to others.I will do my best to give all my love to others.(復述中心)

　　4．As a student，I am strongly for the activity because it is very meaningful and helpful.I hope that this kind of activity will continue in the future.(希望式) 5．How about finding a companion to be with us？So，we

　　can help each other and

　　be happy during the trip.(問題式) 6．Anyhow，different cultures，different customs.If you “Do as the Romans do when

　　in Rome.”，you will enjoy more of your stay here.(引用式) 附　錄： 常見開頭方式： as far as...is concerned對……而言，就……而論 as far as we know據我們所知 as everybody knows/as is known to all眾所周知 as the proverb says正如諺語所說 as the saying goes俗話說 as has been already discussed正如已經討論過的 as has been mentioned above如上所述 however，the difficulty lies in...然而，問題在于…… I am greatly convinced that...我深信…… It is estimated/predicted that...據估計…… It is generally agreed that...大家通常認為…… It is believed/thought that...人們認為…… It is said that...據說…… It is reported that...據報道…… It is well known that...眾所周知…… It must be admitted that...必須承認的是…… It must be pointed out that...必須指出的是…… It must be emphasized that...必須強調的是…… It can be said with certainty that...可以肯定地說…… It can't be denied that...不可否認的是…… It goes without saying that...不言而喻/不用說…… No one can deny that...誰也不可否認的是…… Now that we know that...既然我們知道…… There is no denying the fact that...不可否認的是…… There is no doubt that...毫無疑問…… Therefore，we should realize that...因此，我們應當意識到……

　　to begin with首先 to tell the truth老實說 We must recognize the fact that...我們必須承認…… What calls for special attention is that...需引起特別注意的是…… What we believe is that...我們相信的是…… when it comes to...當提到…… with the develoment of...隨著……的發展 常見結尾方式： all in all總的來說 as a consequence/result結果 from this point of view就此而論 If we can do as mentioned above，there can be no doubt that...如果我們能做到如上所述，毫無疑問…… in a word/in brief/in conclusion/in general/in short/in summary總之；簡言之 In this way，I believe that...如此，我相信…… last but not least最后但同等重要的

　　on the whole總的來看 Only with combined efforts can we...唯有通力合作我們才…… Therefore，we have the reason to believe that... 因此，我們有理由相信…… to sum up概括地說 We can，therefore，come to the conclusion that... 因此，我們可以得出如下結論…… We，therefore，can make it clear from the above discussion that...因此，從上面的討論中我們可以明白……

　　走向高考 · 英語 路漫漫其修遠兮 吾將上下而求索 人教版(課標卷地區) · 高考總復習

　　寫作素能培養

　　第三部分 第七講　寫好開頭和結尾， 實現升級策略 第二部分

　　俗話說得好：好的開頭是成功的一半(Well begun is half done)；結尾好，一切都好(All is well that ends well)。一篇英語作文的開頭如果寫得好，就會給閱卷老師良好的印象，吸引他繼續讀下去；如果結尾又寫得好，就會進一步強化閱卷老師對你所寫作文的好感，從而給你的作文打高分。

　　一、如何寫好開頭 開頭一般來說要做到開門見山，使讀者了解文章要談什么，最好能立刻引起讀者的興趣。下面介紹幾種常見的寫法： 1．背景法——說明事件發生的時間、地點、背景等 Last Monday，my father said goodbye to my mother and me and went on a business trip. 上周一，我爸爸向媽媽與我告別，因為他要外出做生意。

　　2．主題句法——提出一個觀點或論據作為文章要闡明和論述的主題 Old people play an important role in our country，because they have experience，they are wiser，and they have enough time. 老年人在我們國家起著重要的作用，因為他們經驗豐富，聰明智慧，時間充足。

　　3．問題法——用提出問題的方法來引出文章的內容，以吸引讀者的注意力 Why do we go to university？Different people have different opinions. 我們為什么要上大學？不同的人有不同的觀點。

　　4．引語法——摘錄或引用某些名人的名言或常見的習語、諺語作為文章的開端 There is an old English saying，“Gain time，gain life”． Then what is time？Time is a kind of thing that we can't see or touch，but we can feel it pass by. 有一個古老的英語諺語“贏得時間，就贏得生命”。 那么，時間是什么呢？時間是一種看不見、摸不著的東西，但是我們能感覺到它的流逝。

　　5．定義法——常見于對標題下定義，然后通過舉例、邏輯推理等方法加以說明 A good student is one who possesses good morality，sound health，perfect knowledge and various abilities. 一個好學生要擁有良好的品德、健全的身體、完美的知識和各種各樣的能力。

　　6．數據法——引用已經證實的某些統計數字來引起話題 The fact that less than 5%of the British population graduate from universities may seem surprising，especially compared with the American percentage of over 30%. 英國人口中大學畢業生所占的比例不足5%的事實看上去很令人吃驚，尤其是和美國的超過30%的比率相比。

　　7．實例法——通過一個實例或現象引出話題 Nowadays，people in many big cities are complaining about heavy traffic.It has seriously influenced people's daily life and economic development. 現今，許多大城市的人們都在抱怨交通擁堵，它嚴重地影響了人們的日常生活和經濟發展。 用上述開頭法翻譯下列句子 1．上周日，我和同學們去了香山公園。 _________________________________________________ _________________________________________________ 2．眼下，街談巷議，人們的熱門話題總離不開“三貴”：買房貴、上學貴、看病貴。 _________________________________________________ _________________________________________________ 3．當有那么多方式可以與學生家長溝通時，家訪還有必要嗎？ _________________________________________________ 4．正如諺語所說的那樣“時間就是金錢”，是的，情況確實就是這樣。 _________________________________________________ _________________________________________________ 5．寵物是人們飼養并將其視為伙伴的動物。 _________________________________________________ _________________________________________________

　　6．最近的研究表明，有50%的學生不吃早飯。 _________________________________________________ _________________________________________________ 7．目前，怎樣處理垃圾是我們城市面臨的一大問題。 _________________________________________________ _________________________________________________

　　答案：1.Last Sunday，my classmates and I went to Xiangshan Park.(背景法) 2．Nowadays it is often talked about that there are three things that people can't afford.It is expensive to buy houses，to pay for the children's education and to see the doctor.(主題句法) 3．Are home visits necessary when there are so many ways to communicate with

　　students' parents？(問題法)

　　4．As the saying goes，“Time is money.” Yes，it's indeed the case.(引語法) 5．A pet is an animal kept by a person as a companion.(定義法) 6．A recent study shows that 50% of the school kids don't have breakfast.(數據法) 7．How to deal with waste is a big problem for our city now.(實例法)

　　二、如何寫好結尾 結尾有概括全文內容，進一步強調或肯定文章的中心思想，升華主題的作用。主要有以下幾種寫法： 1．照應開頭 Everyone enjoys beautiful things.And seeing sunrise may be one of the most unusual experiences in our life. 每個人都喜歡美好的事物，看日出也許是我們人生中最不平凡的經歷中的一次了。 2．復述中心 We must protect the water as well as find ways to reuse it.If not，the last drop of water will be a teardrop. 我們必須保護水源，尋找再利用水的方法，如果不這樣做，最后一滴水將是人類的一滴淚水。 3．總結式 In a word，a friend in need is a friend indeed.May all of us treasure friendship. 總之，患難之交才是真正的朋友，愿我們所有人珍視友誼。 4．引用式 As the saying goes，every coin has two sides. 常言道，任何事情都有兩面性。 5．希望式 The Internet is now very important to me because it not only gives me a lot of fun but also it is very useful.I like it and hope you will like it too. 現在網絡對我來說非常重要，因為它給我帶來很多樂趣，而且非常有用，我喜歡它，希望你也喜歡它。

　　6．問題式 Will you join us in the next century？How romantic and fantastic it will be! 你愿意在下個世紀加入我們嗎？那將是多么浪漫和奇妙啊！

　　用上述結尾法翻譯下列句子 1．不同的旅行方式都能讓人們愉快，但我還是最喜歡乘火車旅行。 _________________________________________________ _________________________________________________ 2．從這次經歷中，我了解到細心非常重要，尤其在考試時，我們怎樣細心都不為過。 _________________________________________________ _________________________________________________ 3．愛是給予，愛是關注他人，我將盡力把我所有的愛奉獻給他人。 _________________________________________________ _________________________________________________ 4．作為一名學生，我非常支持這項活動，因為它很有意義，對學生很有幫助，我希望此類活動在將來能繼續開展下去。 _________________________________________________ _________________________________________________

　　5．找一個伙伴和我們一起去如何？這樣我們可以互相幫助并且在旅途中保持愉快。 _________________________________________________ _________________________________________________ 6．不管怎樣，有不同的文化，就有不同的習俗，如果你能“入鄉隨俗”，就會更好地享受這里的生活。 _________________________________________________ _________________________________________________

　　答案：1.Different ways of traveling can make people happy，but I like traveling by train most.(照應開頭) 2．From this experience，I learned that being careful is very important and that we can't be too careful，especially in examinations.(總結式) 3．Love is giving and love is paying attention to others.I will do my best to give all my love to others.(復述中心)

　　4．As a student，I am strongly for the activity because it is very meaningful and helpful.I hope that this kind of activity will continue in the future.(希望式) 5．How about finding a companion to be with us？So，we

　　can help each other and

　　be happy during the trip.(問題式) 6．Anyhow，different cultures，different customs.If you “Do as the Romans do when

　　in Rome.”，you will enjoy more of your stay here.(引用式) 附　錄： 常見開頭方式： as far as...is concerned對……而言，就……而論 as far as we know據我們所知 as everybody knows/as is known to all眾所周知 as the proverb says正如諺語所說 as the saying goes俗話說 as has been already discussed正如已經討論過的 as has been mentioned above如上所述 however，the difficulty lies in...然而，問題在于…… I am greatly convinced that...我深信…… It is estimated/predicted that...據估計…… It is generally agreed that...大家通常認為…… It is believed/thought that...人們認為…… It is said that...據說…… It is reported that...據報道…… It is well known that...眾所周知…… It must be admitted that...必須承認的是…… It must be pointed out that...必須指出的是…… It must be emphasized that...必須強調的是…… It can be said with certainty that...可以肯定地說…… It can't be denied that...不可否認的是…… It goes without saying that...不言而喻/不用說…… No one can deny that...誰也不可否認的是…… Now that we know that...既然我們知道…… There is no denying the fact that...不可否認的是…… There is no doubt that...毫無疑問…… Therefore，we should realize that...因此，我們應當意識到……

　　to begin with首先 to tell the truth老實說 We must recognize the fact that...我們必須承認…… What calls for special attention is that...需引起特別注意的是…… What we believe is that...我們相信的是…… when it comes to...當提到…… with the develoment of...隨著……的發展 常見結尾方式： all in all總的來說 as a consequence/result結果 from this point of view就此而論 If we can do as mentioned above，there can be no doubt that...如果我們能做到如上所述，毫無疑問…… in a word/in brief/in conclusion/in general/in short/in summary總之；簡言之 In this way，I believe that...如此，我相信…… last but not least最后但同等重要的

　　on the whole總的來看 Only with combined efforts can we...唯有通力合作我們才…… Therefore，we have the reason to believe that... 因此，我們有理由相信…… to sum up概括地說 We can，therefore，come to the conclusion that... 因此，我們可以得出如下結論…… We，therefore，can make it clear from the above discussion that...因此，從上面的討論中我們可以明白……